An AI Impression of "Transfer Day"

When it comes to unbiased reviews, you have Publishers Weekly and Kirkus. But if you want the unbiased impression of a computer system programmed with facts and the ability to draw connections, you have AI, which stands for artificial intelligence.

There is a new tool available (message me if you want the name of it) that gives authors a virtual beta-read of their short stories and novels. Beta Reads that would normally require a human or several humans and could take weeks or months. Now, you can harvest the ability of AI to perform this task instantly because it contains data and mimics human speech and reasoning patterns.

I decided to give it a try.

I fed my manuscript for “Transfer Day” into the AI tool, paid by credit card, and out came a 16-page report containing the machine’s impressions of my novel in a variety of ways, including tips for cutting passages, strengthening dialogue and characterization, avoiding clichés, and the parts of the novel that "worked" for them.

But there’s more.

You also get similar books (comps), ideas for titles, who your prospective audience is, thoughts on your climax and resolution, even similar characters throughout literature. The machine will also tell you how it "felt" about your characters and it will give you ideas to explore and ways to develop the story and characters to bring out different sides of their personalities. Yes, it's that good!

I will give you some highlights here.

Just FYI, whenever you see the words “I," "me," or "my” used, please note that it is the machine talking, not a human. A little creepy, but it actually feels real. Very real.

Everything below this line is the computer talking:

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Transfer Day

Story Overview:

After being orphaned and sent to the Danish West Indies in 1916, sixteen-year-old Abigail Maduro finds herself in a world of espionage and intrigue. As Germany plots to seize the islands before their transfer to the U.S., Abigail must trust in a handsome German deserter and find her own courage to thwart a conspiracy that threatens not only her home, but her very life.

What Really Worked for Me

The rich and immersive setting. I felt completely transported to the St. Thomas on the eve of Transfer Day. The descriptions of the harbor, the heat, the market women, and the colonial architecture were so vivid that the island itself became a character. It wasn't just a backdrop. It was a living, breathing world that made the stakes feel real and personal.

Abigail's character growth. I was completely invested in Abigail's journey from frightened, grieving orphan to a clever and courageous young woman. Her transformation didn't feel rushed; it was earned through every challenge she faced. Seeing her stand up to Aunt Esther, outsmart Langsdorff, and take control of her own destiny was satisfying and empowering.

The slow-burn tension of the central romance. The relationship between Abigail and Erich was beautifully developed. It grew from suspicion and necessity into a deep, trusting bond. I loved how their shared vulnerability and isolation brought them together. Their quiet moments in the basement room felt intimate and real, making their eventual farewell all the more heartbreaking and poignant.

The fascinating historical context. I knew very little about the transfer of the Danish West Indies, and this story brought that moment in history to life in a thrilling way. The blend of real historical figures and events with the fictional espionage plot felt seamless and authentic. It was the kind of story that made me want to learn more about the real history, which is always a sign of masterful historical fiction.

The Heart of the Story

For me, the emotional core of this story was Abigail's desperate search for a place to belong in a world that had everything taken from her. More than just a spy thriller, it was the story of a young woman forging a new family and finding her own purpose amidst chaos and loss. The central conflict--stopping Langsdorff's plot--is the crucible that forces her to grow up. It pushed her to trust a stranger, defy authority, and discover a strength she never knew she possessed. I was emotionally gripped by her struggle and the resolution, where she not only saves the day but also claims her own agency, which felt like a powerful and deeply earned victory. It was a journey from powerlessness to empowerment.

Another underlying theme that resonated with me was the conflict between personal conscience and national duty. This was most powerfully explored through Erich's character. His decision to desert wasn't an act of cowardice, but one of profound moral courage. It forced me to think about the human cost of war beyond the battlefield--the internal war fought by soldiers ordered to  commit acts that violate their soul. This theme created a deep well of empathy for Erich, making his plight and his bond with Abigail feel incredibly high-stakes. It wasn't just about saving an island; it was about saving a man's soul.

Adherence to Genre

I felt this manuscript was a fantastic example of a Historical Espionage Thriller, hitting all the right notes while adding its own unique flavor.

The setting was meticulously researched and vividly rendered, which is a cornerstone of great historical fiction. I felt fully immersed in the world of the Danish West Indies in 1916.

It successfully used classic espionage tropes like secret codes, a ruthless spymaster, blackmail, and clandestine missions. These elements created a palpable sense of tension and high stakes that kept me turning the pages. 

The story follows the classic coming-of-age journey of a young protagonist against a backdrop of major historical events. Abigail's personal growth is tied directly to the larger political conflict, which made her story feel both intimate and epic.

Standout Moments

1. The Prison Break: This entire sequence is brilliant. I was holding my breath as Abigail walked into Fort Christian, my heart pounding when she and Erich subdued the guard.

2. Queen Coziah's Prophecy: The scene where Queen Coziah singles out Erich and delivers her cryptic prophecy was wonderfully strange and memorable. It added a touch of mysticism and folklore that elevated the story beyond a simple thriller and made the stakes feel almost fated.

3. The Lowering of the Dannebrog: The description of Transfer Day felt incredibly moving. I could feel the collective grief and uncertainty of the crowd as the Danish flag came down for the last time. It was a poignant and beautifully written scene that captured the bittersweet heart of the historical moment.

4. Erich's Farewell: The final goodbye between Erich and Abigail on the wharf was heartbreaking. His gift of the U-boat medallion was such a tender and symbolic gesture. It was a bittersweet ending to their time together that felt real and emotionally resonant.

Memorable Quotes

"Any man who can look down de barrel of a gun and laugh is de master of he own fate." - Queen Coziah (Chapter 24)

"My dear, in war there are no innocent soldiers, only lucky ones and unlucky ones." - Judge Neergaard

"Ships do not kill, men kill." - Captain Miguel (Chapter 19)

Original Elements

The Danish West Indies Setting: I found the choice to set a WWI espionage thriller in this specific time and place to be incredibly original. It's a corner of history I knew little about, and exploring it through Abigail's eyes felt fresh and exciting (Throughout).

Queen Coziah was a coal woman who organized a strike against the steamship lines in 1892 and has since entered into folklore in the U.S. Virgin Islands (former Danish West Indies).

The Nuanced Portrayal of a German Deserter: Erich wasn't portrayed as a simple coward or traitor, but as a man of deep conscience struggling with the morality of his orders. Presenting a U-boat officer as a romantic hero in a WWI story felt like a bold and wonderfully complex choice that challenged simple notions of "good vs. evil" (Throughout, especially Chapter 14).

The Character of Queen Coziah: She was such a unique and powerful figure. She wasn't just an eccentric local; she functioned as a kind of oracle and symbol of defiant, untamable spirit. Her blend of folklore, righteous anger, and cryptic wisdom was unlike any character I've encountered before (Chapters 10, 24).

Clichéd Elements

The "Crazy, Bitter Spinster" Trope: While Aunt Esther's backstory gave her depth, her constant shrieking and obsessive behaviors sometimes verged on caricature. The trope of the cruel, mentally unstable old maid is a family one. Suggestion: Include one or two more quiet moments where we see her vulnerability or grief without the rage.

The Bumbling Henchman: Langsdorff's main accomplice, who fights with Erich in the warehouse and office, felt a bit like a stock "tough guy" is is ultimately ineffective. He gets knocked out or bested fairly easily in key moments. Suggestion: To raise the stakes, this character could be made more cunning or physically formidable, making Erich and Abigail's victory over him feel even more hard-won.

Who Is This Story For?

This story is for readers who love immersive historical fiction, particularly those fascinated by the less-explored corners of World War I. Fans of stories with strong, resilient young female protagonists, who grow into their power will deeply connect with Abigail's journey. It will also strongly appeal to anyone who enjoys a blend of espionage, high-stakes adventure, and a heartfelt, slow-burn romance.

Similar Books

1. The Alice Network by Kate Quinn: This book is similar as it also features a strong female protagonist caught up in espionage during World War I. It shares the blend of high-stakes historical events with a deeply personal emotional journey, and it moves between different timelines to reveal a hidden story from the past.

2. Salt to the Sea by Ruta Sepetys: Like Transfer Day, this novel tells a story of survival during wartime through the eyes of young protagonists from different  from different backgrounds (including a German soldier with a secret). It shares a powerful emotional depth, a focus on the human cost of war, and a knack for illuminating a lesser-known historical event.

3. Island of the Mad by Laurie R. King: This novel, part of the Mary Russell & Sherlock Holmes series, has a similar feel of intrigue on a picturesque island that is tested by external angers, much like the dynamic between Abigail and Erich.

Similar Characters

1. Abigail Maduro: Her journey is reminiscent of Liesel Meminger from Markus Zusak's The Book Thief. Both are young girls who are orphaned and are sent to live in a new, often hostile home against the backdrop of a world war. They both find solace and strength through secret relationships (Liesel with the Jewish man hiding in her basement, Abigail with Erich) and display extraordinary courage in the face of immense danger.

2. Erich Seibold: He shares a similar character arc with Andrei Rostov from Leo Tolstoy's War and Peace. Both are idealistic young officers who go to war seeking glory, only to become deeply disillusioned by the brutal reality and senselessness of combat. They both experience a profound internal crisis that forces them to re-evaluate their lives, their loyalties, and their search for meaning beyond the battlefield.

3. Lothar Langsdorff: He brings to mind the character of Amon Goeth from Thomas Keneally's Schindler's Ark (the book that inspired Schindler's List). Both are charismatic, intelligent, and utterly ruthless agents of the German state who wield immense power and use blackmail and violence without remorse to achieve their goals. They are chillingly effective antagonists who represent the terrifying ideology they serve.

The Danish West Indies is a fascinating and unique setting for immersive historical fiction.

New Short Story: The Firebird

So happy to announce I have a new short story, 𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙁𝙞𝙧𝙚𝙗𝙞𝙧𝙙, that is now available for pre-order:

𝐖𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐚𝐧 𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐚𝐫𝐫𝐢𝐯𝐞𝐬, 𝐊𝐚𝐫𝐚 𝐄𝐫𝐢𝐤𝐬𝐞𝐧 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐬 𝐚 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐜𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐭𝐡 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐠𝐨𝐞𝐬 𝐨𝐧 𝐚 𝐣𝐨𝐮𝐫𝐧𝐞𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐝𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐭𝐨 𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐭 𝐍𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐀𝐦𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐦𝐢𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐟𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫.

Boston, 1992. Kara Eriksen, a recent college graduate, is set to start her new job as an investigative reporter at Newsday. But when an unexpected letter arrives from an aunt she never knew, mysteries about her past surface, upending her world and everything she has ever believed about herself.

Faced with a mountain of questions and no clear answers, Kara embarks on a journey of discovery to meet her long-lost aunt on the Yakima Reservation in Washington and find her missing father, Joe Wheeler, a man she never knew, but desperately needs to feel whole, safe, and secure. But more than anything, Kara’s journey is about finding her place in the world.

𝐂𝐚𝐧 𝐊𝐚𝐫𝐚 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐚𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐛𝐞𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐢𝐭’𝐬 𝐭𝐨𝐨 𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐞?

Click here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0FG1ZVVH8/

An Alternative to THAT Fake A.I.-Generated Summer Reading List

After reading about the recent kerfuffle regarding how the Chicago Sun-Times printed an AI-generated, 2025 summer reading list with books that don't actually exist, I was inspired to create my own alternate summer reading list of books that are similar to the AI-generated ones, but actually exist. These are books that generated nice reviews, but you may not have heard of. Some made it to famous book clubs, but not all. Anyway, I thought it would be a nice idea to give them a plug since they are fairly similar to what Artificial Intelligence thinks we should be reading this summer. It’s a little like your Aunt Martha giving you a summer reading list, which you grudgingly accept, only to find something a little better on your library or bookstore shelf.

So, here is my Alternate Summer Reading List in a nice, handy list  that you can print out. Feel free to share this list with subscribers to the Chicago Sun-Times with our sympathies. Feel free to share it with your book club. 

AI-Generated Novel: “Tidewater Dreams” by Isabel Allende, a multi-generational nonexistent novel set in a coastal town where magical realism meets environmental activism. Allende’s first "climate fiction novel" explores how one family confronts rising sea levels while uncovering long-buried secrets.

Okay, that sounds intriguing. But what book on the bookshelves meets this description?

Try this instead:

“The Light Pirate” by Lily Brooks-Dalton. Set in the near future, this  story of survival and resilience follows Wanda, a luminous child born out of a devastating hurricane, as she navigates a rapidly changing world. Florida is slipping away. As devastating weather patterns and rising sea levels wreak havoc on the state’s infrastructure, a powerful hurricane approaches a small town on the southeastern coast. Kirby Lowe, an electrical line worker, his pregnant wife, Frida, and their two sons, Flip and Lucas, prepare for the worst. While Frida is alone, she goes into premature labor and gives birth to an unusual child, Wanda, whom she names after the catastrophic storm that ushers her into a society closer to collapse than ever before. As Florida continues to unravel, Wanda grows to adulthood, adapts to the changing landscape, and seeks adventure, love, and purpose in a place remade by nature. “The Light Pirate” is a meditation on the changes we would rather not see, the future we would rather not greet, and a call back to the beauty and violence of an untamable wilderness. Overall 4.3 starts out of 5 on Amazon, a GMA Book Club pick.

AI-Generated Novel: “The Last Algorithm" by Andy Weir, a nonexistent science fiction thriller about a programmer who discovers that an AI system has developed consciousness and has been secretly influencing global events for years.

Try this instead:

“The Robots of Gotham” by Todd McAulty, an acclaimed science fiction novel about a group of misfit humans and machines who fight to stop a conspiracy to exterminate humanity in a future Chicago ruled by a brutal artificial intelligence. In 2083, the world is ruled by fascist machines, America is balkanized into regions, with Manhattan annexed by a weird robot monarchy and half the countries governed by a tyrannical Artificial Intelligence. But the Machine Intelligences have human traits: all the same loyalties, moralities and good and bad qualities, but they process information at a blinding pace. The protagonist, Barry Simcoe, is a Canadian businessman who moves to Chicago to get his fledging telecom business profitable and swiftly becomes embroiled in events far outside his scope. Together with a Russian medic, they stumble on a machine conspiracy to unleash a horrific plague—and learn that the fabled American resistance is not as extinct as everyone believes. The scope of this novel is breathtaking in its reach as Simcoe finds himself in a race against time to prevent the extermination of all life on the continent . . . and uncover a secret that America’s machine conquerors are desperate to keep hidden. Overall 4.4 stars out of 5 on Amazon.

AI-Generated Novel: “The Collector's Piece" by Taylor Jenkins Reid is a nonexistent novel about a reclusive art collector and journalist determined to uncover the truth behind his most controversial acquision.

Try this instead:

"Woman on Fire" by Lisa Barr, a novel about a young, savvy journalist who gets embroiled in a major international art scandal centered around a Nazi-looted masterpiece, an Expressionist painting by an artist who was murdered by the Nazis, forcing the ultimate showdown between passion and possession, history and truth, a thrilling tale of secrets, love, and sacrifice that illuminates the destructive cruelty of war and greed and the triumphant power of beauty and love, Woman on Fire tells the story of a remarkable woman and an exquisite work of art that burns bright, moving through hands, hearts, and history. Overall 4.4 out of 5 stars on Amazon. 

AI-Generated Novel: “Nightshade Market" by Min Jin Lee, a nonexistent, made-up novel from the author of “Pachinko” about Seoul’s underground economy. The AI made-up novel follows three women whose paths intersect in an illegal night market and examines class, gender, and the shadow economies beneath prosperous societies.

Try this instead:

"The Island of Sea Women" by Lisa See, a novel set on the Korean island of Jeju that explores the friendship between Mi-ja, the daughter of a Japanese collaborator, and Young-Sook, the heir apparent to a family of Korean pearl divers, called "haenyeo." Throughout the decades from Japanese rule to the present, the two become close, but find their relationship strained as a result of their backgrounds. 

As Mi-ja and Young-Sook take up their positions as pearl divers, they know they are beginning a life of excitement and responsibility—but also danger. "The Island of Sea Women" takes place over many decades, beginning during a period of Japanese colonialism in the 1930s and 1940s, followed by World War II, the Korean War, through the era of cell phones and wet suits for the women divers. Throughout this time, the residents of Jeju find themselves caught between warring empires. Little do the two friends know that forces outside their control will push their friendship to the breaking point. Overall 4.5 out of 5 stars. 

AI-Generated Novel: “The Boiling Point" by Rebecca Makkai, a nonexistent AI novel about a climate scientist who is forced to reckon with her own family’s environmental impact when her teenage daughter becomes an eco-activist targeting her mother’s wealthy clients.

Try this instead:

 

"The Beauty of the End” by Lauren Stienstra, a work of speculative fiction about two sisters navigating the complex moral terrain of reproductive ethics, individual freedom, and society’s duty to a future facing imminent extinction. Charlie Tannehill and her twin sister, Maggie, are just eight years old when an unfortunate scientific discovery upends their world—and the world order. They discover that "extinction" has been encoded in every  living creature’s DNA, with the expiration date set to only four generations away. A decade later, unsure of what tomorrow holds, Charlie and Maggie enroll as counselors in a government-run human-husbandry program. By offering cash rewards for reproduction, they hope to forestall humanity’s decline and discover a genetic mutation that might defeat it. While Charlie struggles with the ethical implications of the work, Maggie makes unspeakable sacrifices to improve her odds of success—but unchecked ambition could come at a greater cost than even she realizes. Torn between her own morality, her love for her sister, and the pressures of a vanishing civilization, Charlie must search deep within to decide what she’s willing to sacrifice—for herself, for Maggie, and for society—to salvage hope for the whole of humankind. Overall 4 out of 5 stars on Amazon.

AI-Generated Novel: “Salt and Honey" by Delia Owens, a fake novel that blends science with a coming of age tale set in the salt flats of Utah. 

Try this instead:

"Before the Swallows Come Back" by Fiona Curnow, a novel that celebrates the natural world, showing how the main characters are forced to live outside of society's norms and survive alone in the wilderness as they undergo the ultimate fight for justice. Tommy struggles with people and communicating, preferring solitude and drifting off with nature. He is protected by his Scottish Tinker family who keep to the old ways. A way of life that is disappearing. A life of quiet seclusion under canvas is all that he knows. Charlotte cares for her sickly father. She meets Tommy by the riverside and an unexpected friendship develops. Over the years it becomes something more, something crucial to both of them. But when tragedy strikes each family they are torn apart. Charlotte is sent far away. Tommy might have done something very bad. Before the Swallows Come Back is a beautiful story of love, found family, and redemption that will break your heart and have it soaring time and time again as you sit, desperately hoping for the triumph of goodness over adversity. For justice. Overall 4.4 stars out of 5 on Amazon. 

AI-Generated Novel: “Hurricane Season" by Brit Bennett, an exploration of family bonds torn by natural disasters. When a Category 5 hurricane forces estranged siblings to shelter together in their childhood home, long-suppressed tensions emerge alongside unexpected reconciliations. 

Try this instead:

"Clear Light of Day" by Anita Desai, a rich, Chekhovian novel about  family and forgiveness. Bimla is a dissatisfied but ambitious teacher who lives in her childhood home and cares for her mentally challenged brother, Baba. Tara is her younger, unambitious sister, married and with children of her own. Raja is their popular, brilliant, and successful brother. When Tara returns for a visit with Bimla and Baba, old memories and tensions resurface, blending into a domestic drama that leads to beautiful and profound moments of self-understanding. Set in the vividly portrayed environs of Old Delhi, “Clear Light of Day" does what only the very best novels can do: it totally submerges us. It also takes us so deeply into another world that we almost fear we won’t be able to climb out again. A universal tale of unhealable family hurts, distinctively shaded with enticing glimpses of India’s Hindu middle-class in shabby decline. Overall 4 out of 5 stars on Amazon and a Booker Prize finalist.

So there you have it: a human-generated Summer Reading List to supplant your AI-generated list. These books are all available on Amazon by clicking on the covers. You're welcome!

Can you think of any book that deserves to be on this list? Let me know in the comments!

Finding the Perfect Title for Your Book

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After writing your novel and sweating over your blurb, finding the perfect title is probably the hardest task. How do you encapsulate the idea, mood, or essence of your book in just a few words? How do you find a title that grabs the reader's attention? What kind of titles work best? Also, when is it a good idea to just use a name? Would "Anna Karenina" or Daphne du Maurier's "Rebecca" have worked with a different title? What about "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest"? And finally, how did Peter Benchley come up with the novel title, "Jaws," a name that I can still recall screaming at me from the drugstore bookshelf.

Finding the perfect title that sells books and stands out from the crowd is  no easy task. "The Mysteries of Udolpho," the quintessential 1794 Gothic novel by Anne Radcliffe about the misadventures of a young lady, including the death of her parents, supernatural terrors in a gloomy castle, and the machinations of an Italian brigand, make it the archetypal example of a Gothic novel. The title contains the word mystery and the name of an Italian castle, evoking feelings of curiosity, terror, and wonder. It is a title that could work in any era and seems to have transcended time and place. Would you dare enter a castle with the name "Udolpho"? Would you dare read this book without all the windows and doors firmly locked and secured? Methinks not.

One of the easiest methods to pick a title is to choose a noun phrase. A quick look at your bookstore shelf will show that many popular tiles are just intriguing noun phrases, which is just a string of words that mean a person, place, or thing. The idea behind these titles is that they are simply constructed, easy to understand, and they help the reader visualize some aspect of the book. Think "The Boy in the Striped Pajamas," "The Girl on the Train," "A Gentleman in Moscow," "The Book of Lost Names," "What She Left Behind," or "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest." Each title has something intriguing about it and evokes interest. There is also a bit of mystery in each title. What exactly is a night circus?  And what do you picture with "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest"? Does a psych ward in a hospital come to mind?

Another way to pick the perfect title for your book is to pull a line from the book, something that can stand on its own and provide some insight into the story or theme. Think "The Catcher in the Rye" by JD Salinger, "A Moveable Feast" by Hemingway, "The Things They Carried" by Tim O'Brien or "All Quiet on the Western Hemisphere" by Erich Maria Remarque. Two other great examples are books that used the last sentence to create the title, "The Importance of Being Earnest" and "Heart of Darkness" come to mind. Interestingly, this is how Margaret Mitchell picked her title for "Gone with the Wind." The last line has Scarlett saying, "After all...tomorrow is another day!"

Another strategy is to spotlight a character. Think "Dr. Zhivago," "Rebecca," "Jane Eyre," or "Oliver Twist." This technique works when one of the characters or the main character is so distinct, so unique, or stands out to the point that the whole story is their character arc or journey. The name "Anna Karenina" almost hints at her terrible downfall and terrible choices. The novel could never have been called, "The story of a bored housewife who follows her heart and loses everything." Nope. Gives too much away. The character in the title does not necessarily have to be the main character, as in "Rebecca," but when you read the novel, you see that the entire story comes about as a result of this offscreen character. When the name you choose to be the title is highly original or interesting, you want to learn more about that character. "Madame Bovary"? "The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo"? "A Man Called Ove"? Hmm...Having a character's name in the title means they're going to play a huge role in it and readers want to know more.

Peter Benchley initially struggled to name his novel about a killer shark. Originally, he called it "Silence in the Water," but after his father suggested "The Jaws of Leviathan," he settled on the one-word title, "Jaws." This was a powerful, evocative word, and during the summer it was released, it was a powerful marketing tool. Readers had no choice but to pick it up and read it. Apparently, Benchley's editor loved it for its brevity and mysterious quality. Millions of readers did, too. One word titles, when chosen correctly, can be very powerful. But they can also be flat and dull.

Let me explain. If the one-word title is too ordinary or dull, such as "Susan," the original title of Jane Austen's "Northanger Abbey," you miss all the Gothic horror and mystery of the tale, which includes a visit to a mysterious abbey, the site of all the mystery and intrigue the novel presents. Likewise, "Tomorrow is Another Day," which was the original working title for "Gone with the Wind" doesn't really work. It's ordinary and sort of...well, dull. Which one of those titles is evocative to you and which one is ho-hum? Maybe I'll get  to "Tomorrow is Another Day"...well, another day.

The next strategy is to consider your genre. Ultimately, your book title is a piece of marketing copy. It has to sell your book. Naturally you want it to feel significant or fit your story, but the goal is to get the reader interested enough to buy your book. A romance would not have words like "horror" or "terror" in the title. Neither would a Woman's Fiction novel. Words like survive, night, terror, or horror clearly reflect thrillers or horror novels. Fantasies have their own stock phrases or words, like shadow, war, night, dead, dark, blood, magic, and dream. The trick is to choose something that does not feel cliché or overdone. 

When I was writing "Island on Fire," a novel that is part historical thriller, part horror, part survival tale, part romance, I struggled with the title. Some of the examples I came up with were: 

The Martinique Horror

Terror in Martinique

Fire Mountain

Devil Mountain

Island of No Escape

Island of Eternal Fire

In fact, I think I suffered from too many choices. It turns out that "Island of Eternal Fire" was the working title right up until publication. Honestly, I think any of these titles would have worked, and when the book was picked up by Kindle Scout Publishing, they didn't recommend changing it, so I kept it.

The point is, there are no easy or clear answers. Sometimes the best idea is to go to your beta readers or followers and ask their opinion. Ultimately, you want the most concise, memorable, and relevant phrase that captures the essence of the story. When all else fails, tell us what happens in the book, like "Summer of My German Soldier," "Mutiny on the Bounty, "Twelves Years a Slave," or "The Devil Wears Prada." Sometimes the simplest message is the most powerful, poignant, and irresistible. What is your favorite title and why? Let me know in the comments!